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Im standing on the edge, blood rushing to my head, will the bleeding ever end. I've seen enough bloodshed. I've seen the end.
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
have I lost the fight, im feeling dead inside, have we reached a impasse, will it ever last , can we move on from the past, will this peace ever last.
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
have we lost the will to fight, have we seen the light , the beginning of a better life, or will the truth turn into lies, will we be ostracized, and now I wonder is it all over.
Now I search for paradise, rather then wasting my life, or will my search will carry on until the next life, or should I enjoy my paradise, with all my friends in my life, this is the end.
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
have I lost the fight, im feeling dead inside, have we reached a impasse, will it ever last , can we move on from the past, will this peace ever last.
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
I watch, waiting to see the end, and I wonder why, when will it end, is it all over
have we lost the will to fight, have we seen the light , the beginning of a better life, or will the truth turn into lies, will we be ostracized, and now I wonder is it all over.
Now I search for paradise, rather then wasting my life, or will my search will carry on until the next life, or should I enjoy my paradise, with all my friends in my life, this is the end.
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the final song to finish my lyric album.
im not sure what needs work anything is helpful.
but i really need to know if it flows good and what peoples perspective is on it.
im not sure what needs work anything is helpful.but i really need to know if it flows good and what peoples perspective is on it.
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I like the message in this, although I'm not a fan of overexceeding repetitions...look out for the double will you wrote in "or will my search will carry on", which seems unneeded to me.
Apart from that, I think that some ? and ! would help us get the feeling of the song and not only that, it could help us understand how this is supposed to be sung.
